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BeLeslie's avatar

Reading between the lines…. Brilliant 🌺💗 love this poem! Look forward to seeing you all again soon.

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you! I look forward to that.

Wendy Hill Williams's avatar

So relevant, Wendy. Love these prompt poems.

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you Wendy.

Wendy Hill Williams's avatar

I relate to this so much, Wendy. Trying to be safe inside the confines of the fence, then realizing I needed to walk out of the gate to find freedom in my spiritual quest. Thank you.

Wendy Carr's avatar

One more thing we share. Thanks for reading!

Wendy Hill Williams's avatar

Yes, the comfort and security of the “old church” became too constrictive and even oppressive. I think there are many of us that have experienced the same. I like that we share this too.

ann schneider's avatar

I love that this is here. How many of us women, girls, relate…many, many.

Spiritual Blessings's avatar

Loved the poem. Looking forward to hearing more

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you!

Carolyn Hannas's avatar

This is beautiful. So heart felt. Some of how I feel these days. It is a heart heavy time put into words. Thank you.

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thanks friend. I appreciate you reading and the kind words.

Hank Wyborney's avatar

pairs well with Robert Frost's "Mending Wall"

Wendy Carr's avatar

It’s been awhile - I will re-read. Thanks.

Ann Edlen's avatar

Wendy, this is a lovely poem and I found the opening stanza particularly compelling.

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you Ann. 💜

Judy Winter's avatar

"Until she found the gate". Beautiful poem! Thank you for the reminder of what life can and should be, even in my 70's...

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you Judy!

Stephanie F.D.'s avatar

Lovely poem, Wendy!

Threads of Light Norma Lee KB's avatar

until she found the gate. nice...love this

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thanks. I appreciate you reading.

Elizabeth Levin's avatar

I feel her sense of discovery.

Wendy Carr's avatar

So glad. Thank you.

Caitlin Ellefson Spohrer's avatar

Wendy, these lines are provocative!

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thanks, Caitlin!

Janet Jones Bann's avatar

powerful

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thanks, Janet.

Heidi Zickefoose's avatar

This is so good. Resonates.

Wendy Carr's avatar

Thank you. Love you.